After working at Firestone High School last semester, I was really excited to go back and tutor my student. When I previously worked with my student, we focused a lot on science and language arts. These two subjects gave my student the most troubles, and I really wanted to see if he had made any progress or not. Together we discussed his classes, teachers, homework and so forth. After talking to him for the first few minutes of arriving at Firestone, I asked him if I could see his grades. His grades were substantially lower than what I would have liked them to be. He did not show that much improvement from the last time that I had been there to tutor him, and his grades had practically stayed the same, or actually worsened, from the last time I had seen him.
I asked him why his grades were so poor and at first he resorted to blaming his teachers. My student said it was because his teachers were boring and didn’t know how to teach. Then it was because they did not calculate his grades correctly, and that they were actually higher than what was being shown. I asked him why he thought his classes were so boring and he could not put his finger on just one problem. The problems that he described to me were dry, unrelateable novels in the classroom, repetitive assignments, and uninteresting class discussions. Once we discussed his day-to-day classroom activities, I asked him what he had been doing to prepare for the OGT’s. It was not a big surprise to me when he told me that the only preparations that he had been doing was what was done in class. I flipped through his prep books and found that about only half of each test was actually completed. Every question that was not multiple choice was left unanswered. He told me that he felt that it was unnecessary to answer these questions because the practice tests were not the ones being scored; basically he was just being extremely lazy.
These issues that we discussed, really made wonder what could be done to make English classes and test prep more intriguing. This was difficult for me because while it is important to prepare for standardized testing, I don’t believe it should take away from the overall school year’s curriculum. From traveling to other schools and reflecting back on my own high school experiences, I believe that some teachers become way to involved with test preparation, and forget about their actual purpose of teaching their designated subject. While it is important for students to score well on these tests, it cannot become our sole focus. As teachers we still need to teach and interpret different texts and strengthen our students writing skills, and not just focus on the best way to answer a multiple question from a short reading.
After contemplating what could be done to incorporate multi-modalities with test preparations, I realized it would be harder than expected. The first idea that I had was to play music during the times that the students were supposed to be doing the practice tests. My student and I discussed how we sometimes struggle in super quiet environments, so if there was music playing in the background, then maybe we would be able to think clearer and concentrate more easily. When determining what music should be played, I thought it would maybe be a good idea for each student to suggest one or two songs, making sure they are classroom appropriate, of their own choice to be made into a classroom playlist.
Also, since I noticed that my student was skipping over the short answer questions I thought that maybe we could incorporate different writing techniques in the classroom to get students more comfortable with written responses. My first thought was just to have them focus on free writing. If I were to have my own class I would like to find various writing prompts through different movie or television clips that could possibly relate to the class’s lesson for the day. I would show the clip that would ideally be between two to five minutes and then have the class free write for about ten minutes. Once they were done free writing, for homework they could proofread what they wrote and then turn in an edited copy. This incorporates different modalities and also helps practice their writing skills for both short answer questions and the writing portion of the test.
The writing section of the test is what I really wanted to focus on with my student, and I believe I would feel the same exact way if I had my own classroom. I asked my student to look at one of the writing prompts from his practice tests and select one to work on. After making his selection, I gave him as much time as he needed to complete what he believed to be sufficient work. I was quite astonished when he handed me a one paragraph essay for his eighteen point essay. His paragraph was loosely structured, had poor grammar, and overall did not really answer the question that was being asked. Together we went over the basic five-paragraph essay format, and discussed some points that he could address in his essay. After we did this, I encouraged him to make a second attempt at his prompt. Another twenty minutes passed, and once again he turned in one paragraph. It was both shocking and disheartening to see my student struggle so much with this portion of the test. We attempted the same prompt for a third time after making yet another outline and really discussing what makes a well written essay. This time he nailed it. There were still some very prominent mistakes, but at least his organization and structure was much more clear and concise. His ideas were coherent and his words were more fluid than what they had been previously.
I was very impressed with the progress that my student had made in such a short period of time, but I do know that this tutoring was not as sufficient as it could have been. If we were given more time to work with our students I deeply believe that a lot more could have been accomplished. I also worry that since we were only able to work on the writing portion for two days, that he might forget what we went over and discussed. It is imperative that students develop good writing skills and as teachers we must make sure that no student slips through the crack. While most students despise writing formal papers, I believe my idea for free writing could work. It allows students to be creative and work on their skills, especially when they go back through and proofread. This activity also not only benefits students just for standardized testing, but it also can benefit their daily writing skills.